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I Am.
I Am Artistic And Creative.
I Wonder Why Life Has To Be So Hard At Times.
I Hear Music In My soul.
I See My Dream Become Reality, Before My Eyes.
I Want To See Everything.
I Am Artistic And Creative.
I Pretend I Can Dance Out In The Rain.
I Feel Imaginary.
I Touch Your Heart.
I Worry About Life Coming To An End.
I Cry About The Past, Never Coming Back.
I Am Artistic And Creative.
I Understand That Nobodies Perfect, In They're Own Ways.
I Say Fight For What You Believe In.
I Dream About Being Free, Being My Own Person.
I Try To Be Positive About Life, No Matter How Hard It Gets.
I Hope I Can Make The Best Out Of My Life.
I Am Artistic And Creative.
I Am, Simply, Me.
Cara Alannah McGregor
I Am Artistic And Creative.
I Wonder Why Life Has To Be So Hard At Times.
I Hear Music In My soul.
I See My Dream Become Reality, Before My Eyes.
I Want To See Everything.
I Am Artistic And Creative.
I Pretend I Can Dance Out In The Rain.
I Feel Imaginary.
I Touch Your Heart.
I Worry About Life Coming To An End.
I Cry About The Past, Never Coming Back.
I Am Artistic And Creative.
I Understand That Nobodies Perfect, In They're Own Ways.
I Say Fight For What You Believe In.
I Dream About Being Free, Being My Own Person.
I Try To Be Positive About Life, No Matter How Hard It Gets.
I Hope I Can Make The Best Out Of My Life.
I Am Artistic And Creative.
I Am, Simply, Me.
Cara Alannah McGregor
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This was basically, a poem assignment for school.
I was told it was good, the teacher approved of it so, I thought I'd put it on here, dA.
So tell me what you think, good?, bad?, okay?.
~Tayu.
I was told it was good, the teacher approved of it so, I thought I'd put it on here, dA.
So tell me what you think, good?, bad?, okay?.
~Tayu.
© 2008 - 2024 TayuXShika
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This is excellent poetry! Even though you use sentences, it's not prose. Poetry makes every word count--and you do that so well!
If I might offer a word of advice about future poems you write, try, like you have done here, to show the reader things instead of just telling them. A picture, an image, paints a thousand words.
It's a beautiful piece on self-reflexion. I admire your integrity.
If I might offer a word of advice about future poems you write, try, like you have done here, to show the reader things instead of just telling them. A picture, an image, paints a thousand words.
It's a beautiful piece on self-reflexion. I admire your integrity.